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"The first half of your sentence should be the hook, pulling readers in. The second half should be the payoff. In his perennially amazing guide Story, Robert McKee explains: "Excellent [writing] tends to shape itself into the periodic sentence: “If you didn’t want me to do it, why’d you give me that…” Look? Gun? Kiss? The periodic sentence is the “suspense sentence.” Its meaning is delayed until the very last word, forcing both [character] and audience to listen to the end of the line.”"